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Kataang - Allow Me... COLORED by TiuanaRui Kataang - Allow Me... COLORED by TiuanaRui
Colored verision of :iconkataang11: 's recent request : :thumb180635605:

Anyways, the lighting of the whole picture is overdone, but everything else is okay!

*UPDATE: I redid the lighting so you guys won't go blind! That answers your "What the hell why you gotta change it?!" question, right?

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Backstory? Um, here we go! Katara accidently drops the groceries on the floor. Aang, lookin' all cool, came to her aid and helped the groceries, and said 'Allow me...' She got a handfull of her stuff, but then without looking, she looked up, and he kissed her.

Okay, I failed at that, but it's something, right?

Kataang (C) Bryke
From Original Request (C) :iconkataang11:
Original and colored work (C) me
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:iconaoi-iro:
Colors are well organized, the lighting effect is interesting and anatomy is alright. I especially like the hair, on both of them.

this is what you should work on here:
Aang's shoulder is too far forward. It looks like it's either dislocated, or his chest/ribcage is extremely thick, far too thick for a 14-year-old. The folds of the cloth on his shirts and pants also don't make very much sense, and you should probably look into working with drawing actual cloth to see what it would look like.

Katara's body seems fairly squished. from her shoulder to her hip seems like it should be stretched out quite a bit. Although the character's arms and legs are the right length, compared to the head and shoulders, the torso itself is off, which gives a very shrunken feel to her stomach and chest.

The last thing that needs work is: Aang doesn't look like he's kissing her nose. His lips are so far forward that it looks like he's biting her, instead.
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:icondumitrulangham25:
Dumitrulangham25 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
cute
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:iconaneasashiko:
AneaSashiko Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Both of these (This and the speed paint version) are adorable and amazing and even better after tonight!
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:iconmachine-birdy:
MACHINE-BIRDY Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
I love the poses. They look so content! :heart:



The lighting is great too!
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:iconcart00nc0uplez:
Cart00nC0uplez Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
That headband :) Sooo hot!! Very nice pic!
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:icondarctrase:
Darctrase Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Beautiful. I love the colors and lightning here. And Aang looks older here, too (it must be the hair). ;)
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:icontukikokinikia:
TukikoKinikia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
Very cute!
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:icon7disney7:
7disney7 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
brilliant work!
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:iconlizzy121314:
lizzy121314 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not really a kataang lover but the artwork so amazing you are awesome aww god damn it you are the idol of drawing
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011   Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm flatter. I'll probably rematser this one soon, though. =D
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:iconlizzy121314:
lizzy121314 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconthe0real0katara:
the0real0katara Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
soo, sparklyy...<3
such a nice picture of these two.
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:iconsunchild22:
sunchild22 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Student Photographer
Beautiful use of colours and light! I love it.
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:icona-young-soul:
A-young-soul Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Amazing artwork, really nice>love it:love:
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011   Digital Artist
Thanks! =D
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:iconluv2drw:
Luv2Drw Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010
cute.
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconluv2drw:
Luv2Drw Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010
:D
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:iconemmers29:
Emmers29 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010   Traditional Artist
This is what should have happened on the dance floor
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010   Digital Artist
=D
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:iconmusable:
musable Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
yay for Kataang! I love it :D
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconxproudtreehuggerx:
xProudTreeHuggerx Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010
Gorgeous!
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconcreepella:
creepella Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
The lighting and the colors give such warmth and smoldering love to the image. It's lovely to look at.
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010   Digital Artist
Hehe! Yea...=D
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:iconyoubigface1:
youbigface1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
wow thats beautiful!
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconedniz:
Edniz Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
This is really awesome! :heart:
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:icongadani13:
Gadani13 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
sooo cute ^_^
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010   Digital Artist
Aww, thanx! =D
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:iconkataang-crazy:
Kataang-crazy Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is amazing!!!!
great work^^
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! I confess that I'm a kataanger and proud of it! =D :love:
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:iconkataang-crazy:
Kataang-crazy Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem^^
cool me too xD
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:iconmyth12:
myth12 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
Eep! This is fantastic!!! I'm so jealous of your coloring skills! D:
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Aww, thanx! =D I'm still learning, though.
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:iconmyth12:
myth12 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
Aren't we all? (;
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:icondawnmichellie:
dawnmichellie Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
SO adorable!!!!! I LOVE it!
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:icondawnmichellie:
dawnmichellie Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!! I absolutely LOVE it ;D
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:iconxtaekwondodox:
XTaeKwonDoDoX Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah love it!!!! :love:
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconrebeca-avatar:
rebeca-avatar Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Gorgeous *-*
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010   Digital Artist
Aww, thanx! :love:
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:icon141188:
141188 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Totally a FAVE :D
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanx! =D
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:iconibetrollin:
IbeTROLLIN Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
finally.... she did it...
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:icontiuanarui:
TiuanaRui Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010   Digital Artist
=D
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:iconibetrollin:
IbeTROLLIN Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's because aang is always the one who's grabbing her for a kiss...
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:icondracorium:
Dracorium Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Student General Artist
so dramatic for something as simple as groceries... What would happen if she's just being really clumsy that day...? *ponders* XD
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